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Friday, May 11, 2012

Chapter 32 Bangkok (Book 2)

Asa Cebu si Carla nung tumawag si boy sa kanya. "oh my God" yun ang unang response ni Carla. "Don't worry Carla maayos din namin yan" sabat ni Boy "Please boy...you know he isn't that well yet at hindi na kumpleto yung treatment ni jake" "You mean Mark?" "Mark, Jake, Rey...whatever..isang tao lang yan Boy" "Eh yung Jordan?" sabat ni Boy Tumahimik ng matagal si Carla. Akala ni Boy ay naputol ang line. "Carla..u there?" pero wala pa ding sumasagot ng kamuntikan ng ibaba ni boy at sinabi na "Naputol ata...Carla..hello" "Boy...yeah..I'm here" "Akala ko wala ka na" "Yes..ano ulit yun?" "Sana maka punta ka dito..I know its very risky, but I think I have Richard and his group under control" Habang hinihimas ni Carla ang kanyang tyan na 8 months na... "Boy...I will try" "hmm...that doesn't sounds like you Carla" "Ewan ko boy..lately...masama parati pakiramdam ko" "But Carla...Jake can die and we don't know his situation..this is a matter of life and death...but anyways...we really need you here..alam mo naman ikaw lang ang close ni Jake" "I know....okay..I will really try Boy" Binaba ni Carla ang phone. Nag iisip ng malalim at kina kausap ang sarile. "My God...what is happening...God please save Jake...don't take him away from me...at alam mo dinadala ko ang anak nya..." Ng Biglang humagulgol si Carla at nag sisigaw... "Buntis with Jordan!!....oh God...why? si Jordan!..." Lumuhod si Carla sa sahig habang umi iyak...di nya malaman kung ano gagawin at kung pano nya itatago at itatanggi na buntis sya. End of Part 1

Deleting the Last Chapter

I am deleting the last chapter. From the reponse, it seems that there was an unfavorable comments. Also, I have to admit that I wrote it in a rush. As a writer, I should be open minded and not egoistic and criticize my own work. Right now, I'm still here in the US, in Los Angeles, doing my job as a Global Network Director of a Real Estate Company. Sounds like the book. I don't even know if this book is guiding my future. Me and Boy got the same salary when we started in Pacific Star Building. I did not also know that there was an existing real estate company in that building. Let's see how it goes. Probably, I will write a side note in regards to the similarity of my life with the characters in the book. I am redoing the "Sabi ng Dyos" from scratch. I hate those flashbacks. Fox